Sunday, October 01, 2006

The Open Door

The ajar door gave me signs

someone inside, but still wasn't

the emptiness howled, my heart cried

she had left me, but the open door gave me hope.

My sadness, tears failed to percieve

my love,she denied to concur

A dim shadow glittered, fooled me again

my life at the mercy of her steps

Yes she left me.

All wishes granted, still one remained

a hole in my soul, I feared to fill

but the open door gave me hope.

Eyes wandered, now unsure what they searched for

the deafening song of silence

the coolness of the winter floor

the sneering laughter of the walls

elements made me lose my sanity.

Midnight moon gleamed and glanced

eyes closed, I felt the pain

my muted lips did speak,

a speach left unheard

A lifeless carcass lay in the corner

Never so dearly had anyone wanted death.

The mocking wind blew again

closed shut my open door

My legs shivered, my heart froze

She would never return....

15 comments:

divya said...

but the open door..beautifully written..

MicroCosm said...

@Divya-- Thanx for the appreciation..I just checked ur profile..and c that u have 4 different blogs..Well that's gonna b tedious reading..But will do my best..cheers

Cyberkitty said...

beautiful painting, awesome poetry !

divya said...

THANKS for visiting..looking forward to something new on your blog..

MicroCosm said...

@Divya...I will not b posting anythin new for smtime..though I hav a few posts lined up..Coz I'll b reposting my previous poems..which were left unread..Hope to c ur insightful comments on those..Cheers

Neer said...

"Midnight moon gleamed and glanced" - my fav lines!

MicroCosm said...

@Neers- So the affable Neer returns again :)
I had a request for u...One of ur posts was beyond my poetic understanding..Mind explaining it to me..?

Neer said...

and which one would that be?? or you jus pulling my leg??? :) i know, what you say about hope!

2lrbl said...

"my muted lips did speak, a speach left unheard", very nice.... "A dim shadow glittered, fooled me again my life at the mercy of her steps".... you have a way with those thoughts, scintillating...

:)... have fun

Neer said...

long time... no post!!

MicroCosm said...

@Neers-NOw that U have said it..Am posting a new one rite now..Thanx for the wake up call :)

Anonymous said...

quite intensly written...1 whos lost in d game of love cn only truly understand d hidden meaning of dis poem...

MicroCosm said...

@Anony.- Maybe!!!!

jac said...

It was just a mirage...so wait, she will return.

MicroCosm said...

@Jac- I wish I cud say the same..but i've turned a new page :)