Beneath a blue veil, velvet across
winged arms and daisy eyes
Gliding through the mushroom clouds
icy wind blowing in their sails
Remeniscent of dreams
of an early winter morning swim
Like the sand trickling down the clock
cayenne sunlight leaves trails on a path
on which..
the horizon has seemed nearer
ever since the dawn
On the lashes now weigh the day's length
a tinge of arrogance in a pyramid of camaraderie
A flap here and then another
their frail bodies almost somnambulating
A tipsy tail in awe of the me'-tier
of the leader, the paragon, their way in the skies
The air becomes opium, tickles and numbs
way-farers on wings become tiny dots
The best journey
Doesn't need a destination.....
30 comments:
beautiful!!! indeed!
p.s: idiom i like and dont follow?? nah, doesnt happen! i like only the stuff i could carry! :p
A huge coincidence that I dropped over to ypur place after a comment on the geese and their 'V' flight paths!
:)
Beautifully written!!
:)
awesomely described...i specifically liked d opening....
@Neers- Maybe I had smone in my mind wen I wrote this piece :p
@Velu Nair- I always look forward to ur comments..Dont know why..But its a pleasure seeing ur name in my comments blog all the time :)
@Navgeet- Thanx for the appreciation bro
nice lines!
and yes, now how do I convince people that yes i am a 17 yr old??????
should I upload my birth certificate on the blog to prove it?
anyway, thanx 4 ur million $ comment on my blog!
keep visiting!
:)
@Ketki- Thanx for the comments dear...
are you a poet?
@Kalpana- Am flattered even to be called in the same breath as a Poet..
And Me..Am a child trapped inside a man's body..fascinated by everythin new :)
he best journey doesnt need a destination... man i got enough motivation in that.. you write realy well and i have a big fascination for poets as such.. wonder how you ppl get these muses..
:) no updates??
hi,
Beautiful blog
of good taste
nice words
@Neers- R u kiddin me buddy!!!..At last am gettin some comments on my posts..Let'em have their 15mins(one week really!!) of fame..Will post an update soon..I LOVE MY BLOG.. :)
@Lash- U're the 2nd person to call this idle-o-holic a poet...Am grateful..One of these days I do aspire to write like a poet..But I think its a long journey( I do have these attacks of modesty smtimes..hehe)
Ask Neer..she will know a thing or two about poetry :)
@Mindside- Thanx for the appreciation ParDner!!!
but they have a destination always.
you have a nice blog !
@Jac- Its Poetry my dear..dats all I can say :)
beautiful pics with those beautiful poems..did u take them urself/.
@Neha- I really wish I did..but have borrowed it frm smwhere.... Thanx for the comments thgouh!!
:)
so true..the best journey doesn't need a destination!! and yet we all try so hard to find a destination..crazy humans!!
hmm
@Jac- So nw u agree!!! :)
@Divya- Always love ur comments..Keep em comin dear :)
@Neers-- What is that you think about my dear????
Exquisite pictures, love the colors !
@CyberKitty- Thanx 4 d comments..priceless they indeed are!!!
The best journey
Doesn't need a destination.....
Beautiful...
Nice blog,by the way.
@Anamika anyone- Thanx for the comments and for the BY The Way :)
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