A distance away I heard a voice
a noise so mute yet so loud
A sob, a cry, maybe a laugh
the long river between us
I longed to cross
Could he be a miss
could she be a man
Out of the woods I made my way
and saw a girl beneath a veil
through the haze, the blurred view
a man beside her, silent and sombre
friend, lover, brother or her man
my mind raced to comprehend
The leaves ruffled, the birds flew
as she saw him. now ready to leave
No words spoken, just the eyes cried
the moist air took the haze away
Then I saw that lovely face, the veil on her lap
She cried again
Conscious not yet, I held out my hand
as if to hold the man's steps
A traitor or a failed lover
a common man or a soldier of fortune
Is he the man who guards the fort
I waited there, hoping he would stay...But ...but....
He went away and there she lay
and under the veil again she came
With a sinking breath I watched her sigh......
7 comments:
so painful
to witness and to sense
and be unable to take a step.
A sigh of relief ?
or a sigh of regret ?
@ Mindside---yes!! So near yet so far!!!
@Jac-- Relief is miles away..regret I cant..Coz I did nothin and was just a spectator..
Thanx for the valuable comments!!
how about writing something happy? :)
Hi,
wonderful words..
Hmmmm....romance bleeding in melancholy....interesting....i wonder why pathos attracts...
I like this the best.
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